Heartburn mixedbag April 13, 2016 June 4, 2016 6 Comments on Heartburn This vindaloo we’ve ordered is vicious! My mouth is on fire and ice water isn’t helping. It’s suddenly sweltering in here. My palms are all sweaty. It’s probably just the chilis. I slip the engagement ring back into my pocket. Another day. Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to share on Google+ (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window)Click to share on Tumblr (Opens in new window)Click to email this to a friend (Opens in new window)Like this:Like Loading...
Marcy April 14, 2016 at 3:47 pm What a fun little story! I love the title and the ambiguity too. Maybe the sweaty palms were from nerves? Reply ↓
mixedbag Post authorApril 14, 2016 at 10:09 pm He was going to propose so yes, nerves 🙂 Thanks, Marcy! Reply ↓
Christine Hanolsy April 15, 2016 at 12:14 am Great job, Hema – this version has so much more life to it! 🙂 Reply ↓
mixedbag Post authorApril 15, 2016 at 12:43 am I'm so glad you think so, Christine! It's all thanks to you 🙂 Reply ↓
What a fun little story! I love the title and the ambiguity too. Maybe the sweaty palms were from nerves?
He was going to propose so yes, nerves 🙂 Thanks, Marcy!
Great job, Hema – this version has so much more life to it! 🙂
I'm so glad you think so, Christine! It's all thanks to you 🙂
Burn indeed!
I hope he did propose to her another day 🙂